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Heart's Desire

Mother shook her head in deep despair of the new love I had found. But Daddy said,” He’s not your type, he is seen all over town.” I didn’t want to heed them, as I knew he had my heart. I cried, “I truly love him. Please don’t tear us apart.” I had romantic images of sitting by the fire. Wrapped in my arms contentedly, he of my heart’s desire. “You’re far too young”, said Mother, “To truly know your mind.” And Daddy added, “Wait awhile, another love he’ll find.” I couldn’t be dissuaded. My folks at last agreed. I begged them not to worry. There truly was no need. They didn’t know their daughter had shrewdly hedged her bet. To keep my love from straying, I’d taken him to the vet. Entered in "Burlesque Twist" contest Won First Place

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Date: 8/25/2011 4:44:00 PM
Joyce-Sorry for the delay in my comment-thank you so much for entering my contest-This one surprised me the most. You are awesome!!!
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Date: 8/22/2011 2:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Natalie's "Burlesque Twist" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/19/2011 7:24:00 PM
Ohhhh thank the lord Joyce!! a kitty cat! yes mine is going to the vet soon! light & Love
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Date: 8/19/2011 7:13:00 PM
LOL well, then he was little good for you either ;) nice win joyce! Light & Love
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Date: 8/19/2011 4:55:00 PM
congratulation on your win,Joyce.keep winning...
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Date: 8/19/2011 3:50:00 PM
hey Joyce, congrats on your super dooper win David, thought i had already done this but maybe it did not get through....
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Date: 8/19/2011 11:12:00 AM
Many congratulations, Joyce : ) I knew this gem would be a big winner
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Date: 8/19/2011 10:25:00 AM
Joyce, Simply brilliant burlesque...congrats on your win. Gwendolen
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Date: 8/19/2011 9:41:00 AM
So cute! a great play on words and peoples perceptions. congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/18/2011 6:50:00 AM
OOO! I feel this. Well done Congratulations. Tony
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Date: 8/18/2011 12:35:00 AM
Hah!! Great twist at the end of this one. Don't have time to congratulate everyone, but so happy to see you at the top with another great writer, Chris Matt. Bravo and congratulations, dear Joyce! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/17/2011 10:36:00 PM
Super congrats Joyce on your first place win my friend.. terrific piece..luv...
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Date: 8/17/2011 9:49:00 PM
Joyce, I enjoyed this winning write. Congratulations on your first place win. ~Glenna
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Date: 8/17/2011 9:20:00 PM
burlesque fo sho! congrats!
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Date: 8/13/2011 10:20:00 PM
Clever write Joyce, very witty....best of luck in the contest....smiles...chiquita
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Date: 8/13/2011 6:20:00 PM
LOL, Wonderful funny write lovely Lady......good luck on contest...with love...old Jack
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Date: 8/13/2011 4:40:00 PM
LOL, I didn't see that coming! Clever write, my friend : )
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