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Heartbreak Hill

Come with me while we take a trip down this road and up this hill the first few miles I wanted to skip I started out strong but lost my will on this road called Heart Break Hill... as I looked back I could see my friend matching my stride we wanted to win now how meany times have we faced this hill and how meany ways can we be fulfilled we gave it our all we faced this plight then left behind our fears at last our journey's done we've run this race with blood and tears we've kept the pace not first, not last we knew the drill on this road called Heart Break Hill..... 8/14/20

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Date: 8/22/2020 5:11:00 PM
Hello Doris ... really enjoyed reading Heartbreak Hill with the short lines and the struggle tale - thank you Doris - Lindsay
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Doris Bounds
Date: 8/23/2020 9:33:00 AM
thank you Lindsay for the kind words..my preacher and his wife ran this race in marathon for fifteen miles in Michigan with others,and taught us how not to give up..so I wrote this from his and his friends journey along this race,be blessed

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