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Heart Condition

Nothing is about us..is it, yet we can feel or maybe hide better than the next, But what is the point of hiding if we can express those feelings at best, I've often said it's not me, but then how could I possibly relate, And really if it wasn't me at all, how could I even partially try to explain, The mirror shares secrets we bury deep inside, But are we willing to see our own while we're able to see into their eyes, The openness to share is a daring door to open, Because it is the key that unlocks answers to many of the hearts conditions.

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Date: 1/18/2025 10:23:00 AM
I like how your poem delves into themes of self-reflection, vulnerability, and the complexities of human connection. It explores the tension between hiding one's true feelings and the challenge of expressing them openly, highlighting the internal conflict many face when confronting their own emotions and those of others.
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