He Sails at The Top

He sets up His mast upon His raft. 
He sailed the tops and groves of the trees in granting
There He goes through the forest, soaring His craft
He provides energy to the wild as the swift wind passes.

The freshness of the timbers climbing,
When they flourish where they're standing
The aroma of wood is the best for understanding
That should have it to vend banded we invoke. 

We notice vines developing, surrounding the trees, 
Sustaining one another breathing in this sphere of unity
We concede that we're learning from them by will
A loving connection between these trees and plants
The woodlands breathe with peace and with sense.

A tree's liveliness needs sustaining credence. 
For its essence, it rightly deserves to be pleading
As if they were holding hands, the trees and vines
It shows us they have the capability of a love within residing.

The trees and different characters thereof, 
An advanced tier of life to replenish our air above
An intelligent, complex organism of vitality 
We discover more about this reality-based formality.

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Date: 11/24/2024 5:55:00 AM
Reality based formality William.' All for it bring It on..We can only learn then, the right from any Wrong.)
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William Darnell Sr
Date: 11/24/2024 6:33:00 AM
That's right, Joe! Right or Wrong, one word for your wrongs, repentance. Thank you for your comment and visit. I appreciate the support, and you and in general. Warm Regards, William
Date: 9/17/2024 3:36:00 PM
Hello William Darnell Sr. I loike the last two verses of this poem. blessings my cfriend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/19/2024 6:43:00 AM
Hello William Darnell Sr. You want to rewrite this poem! Why do you want to rewrite this poem? I like it the way it is. My fav. Verse in this poem are,3 and 4. Blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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William Darnell Sr
Date: 9/18/2024 7:11:00 PM
Well, hello there, Darlene. I'm not sure if comments stay here, but I have a slight editing I need to do. I do not like to edit, but it is necessary. If in chance it doesn't, I at least hope you get this thank you for commenting. Warm Regards, William
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