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He Has Only Just Begun

The chirping of the first bird to which I listen And the first ray of the sun that glistens Are not the beginnings, yet, continuations? Of his caring hand, carrying on its liberation Like untimely drizzling and winged termites Surprises set in with inexplicable delights. Each petal that unfurls from fresh flowers Rays that spread out like rainbow showers Movements of the mind and heart with feelings Timely movement of the sun above the ceilings Birds and beasts have good and bad times. Hearts chant songs of the almighty in chimes. Each act he begins, like ripples on water, spreads With the emerging moon, his graces flow ahead. Each moment is an era of mercy in his hands. They're countless, like gold-dust-like desert sands.

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Date: 5/30/2024 1:43:00 PM
What is man that he should be so bold, so enticing, so enhancing, so perturbed and so anxious - it is a must he must find a means of survival, a means to be able to live and not die. the soul must be awoken to the miraculous ability of existence. An awesome creative piece of poetry Alex. Blessings, Jennifer
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/30/2024 7:01:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 5/30/2024 12:24:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write. What a great ending you have here... Have A Blessed/Wonderful Day....................
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/30/2024 7:01:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 5/30/2024 10:49:00 AM
Dear Christuraj, your poem radiates divine wonder and gratitude for the Almighty's ceaseless grace. The chirping birds, glistening sunrays, and unfurling petals intertwine beautifully with the metaphysical themes. You wonderfully captured how each moment brims with mercy and continuation of the sacred, like "ripples on water" or "desert sands." This transcendent piece awakens the soul to the miracle of existence. Breathtakingly insightful and inspiring! - Blessings, Daniel
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/30/2024 7:01:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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