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Every day starts with a hand full of pills, medicated; he has no hope of thrills, his life is Spartan, without any frills. My visits are his only source of joy, he looks like a man, but he is a boy, and gets all excited over a toy. He loves his father, and I love my son, but all too quickly, my visit is done and he can hardly wait for the next one. Seeing him smile tugs upon my heartstrings, he's an angel, and though life clipped his wings, he's learned to live with whatever fate brings. (Tristich) 7/20/2018

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Date: 11/8/2020 4:59:00 PM
Emile, Page 137 of Navigating..a deep and introspective poem. The words on pages pull all the stronger some how. -Richard
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Date: 11/9/2020 5:56:00 AM
Thanks Richard, I'm pleased to hear you refer to one of the poems in my book, you are the first poet to do so, (Navigating The Backwaters Of My Mind), I appreciate you comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2018 7:45:00 PM
Back with congrats, Emile.
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Date: 9/16/2018 9:08:00 AM
Thanks Line, your support is invaluable my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/10/2018 12:52:00 PM
Emile, thank you for sharing this heartfelt write, and congratulations on your placement. See your Soup Mail
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Date: 9/10/2018 1:04:00 PM
Thanks Curtise, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/10/2018 8:35:00 AM
A great poem between father and son Emile. I feel with you as our times with our sons are precious and the moments together go quickly. A perfect description of a medicated life. Sorry my friend. Congrats on you well deserved win...Charlie
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Date: 9/10/2018 10:03:00 AM
Thanks Charles, I appreciate your supportive comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/10/2018 6:32:00 AM
Drugs ruin lives... Great words of support.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 9/10/2018 7:38:00 AM
Thanks Silent one, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/21/2018 12:40:00 AM
Your poetry always moves me Emile. This one is no exception. I could visualise the scene so well. Very poignant my friend! : )
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Date: 7/21/2018 8:35:00 AM
Thanks Connie, your comments are appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/20/2018 10:14:00 PM
A touching poem, Emile.
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Date: 7/21/2018 8:35:00 AM
Thanks Line, your comments are appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/20/2018 1:44:00 PM
A well penned reflection of heartbreak. Good write, Emile. Find rest, you and your boy.
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Date: 7/20/2018 5:10:00 PM
Thanks Lawrence, I appreciate your compassionate comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/20/2018 10:25:00 AM
Wow, very well expressed Emile. ! :)
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Date: 7/20/2018 11:04:00 AM
Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/20/2018 9:56:00 AM
Beautiful rhyme. Very heartbreaking
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/20/2018 11:05:00 AM
Thanks Anna, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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