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Haunting of the Heart

Bloody as can be The blade that pierced me So close to the heart A wound that will make me fall apart Her fragrance of I'm aware The fake cries of her despair Come they do emotions numb For which I will not Succumb Tears held in mine eyes I hold back so she can't see me cry Dismal is thoughts of love again Maybe next time I shall win Rose colored glass as solace worn Hold me over until I no longer morn 3/29/2019

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/30/2024 8:34:00 AM

Hello Michael Craig, when a love goes wrong it is painful. It takes time to heal. What goes around comes around. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Michael Craig

Date: 1/21/2020 1:15:00 PM

Thanks for taking the time to read my entry and the congratulations. - Silent one

Silent One

Date: 1/19/2020 7:37:00 AM

I see this is full of sadness... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Michael Craig
Date: 1/21/2020 1:40:00 PM

Thanks for taking the time to read my entry and for the congratulations. - Silent One

Michael Craig

Date: 5/24/2019 11:48:00 AM

CayCay, I so look forward to your critic of my work. Thank you so much.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 5/24/2019 9:50:00 AM

Straight to my heart where I hold the pain of my own unrequited love. Though it was long ago and I've made friends with it, the heart does hold it and your emotional lines woke it so poetically awake. A heartbreak delivered in wonderful ink! Oh, so good. Thanks for the uplifting message, Michael. I love this one. CayCay (form is rhyme)

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/1/2019 8:27:00 PM

Your poem expresses the sadness of lost love so intimately and beautifully, Michael. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Michael Craig
Date: 5/2/2019 12:32:00 PM

Susan, thank you for the congratulations and for the warmest wishes. - Mike

Eve Roper

Date: 4/18/2019 10:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win in Laura's contest. Have a great Easter. Hugs Eve ~`*

Michael Craig
Date: 5/2/2019 12:34:00 PM

I'm a little late with the thank you. Hope you had a wonderful Easter. - Mike

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/17/2019 9:58:00 PM

The highs and lows of love can be blissful or devastating. Most of us can relate. Poignant and well expressed Michael. Congratulations on your win! Aloha, Connie

Michael Craig
Date: 4/18/2019 12:18:00 PM

Thank you, Connie. The poem you entered was most beautiful. Congratulations on your first place win most deserved.