Haiku On Haiku

A smudge of black ink On a white sheet of paper Difficult to scrub

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Jcb Brul

Date: 1/31/2022 4:52:00 AM

My kind of Haiku! Vivid and crisp. Keep coming dear poet friend.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/30/2022 11:19:00 AM

Rorschach test, anyone?! ~ Smudges only; no stains. :) gw

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/30/2022 6:05:00 AM

Valsa, this is absolutely stunning. You've created a breathtaking scene that has struck a deep, inner part of me.

John Lawless

Date: 1/30/2022 4:48:00 AM

Very well done Valsa, captures a moment for just about everybody...especially poets.

Anil Deo

Date: 1/29/2022 11:48:00 PM

beautifully perceived! shalom, shalom my Sister in JESUS CHRIST

Valsa George
Date: 1/30/2022 3:36:00 AM

Thanks a lot Anil brother.... ! Peace and love.!

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 1/29/2022 11:08:00 PM

Indeed, scrub too hard, and you'll start a boy scout's / girl guide's fire and turn it all to flame. These short poems, the Haiku are excellent. Some poets really have a talent to make large something that would seem quite small. You have a talent with the Haiku. Shall read your other poems/stories.

Valsa George
Date: 1/30/2022 3:38:00 AM

I have just begun writing Haiku ! If you feel I have a talent in it, I feel encouraged ! Thanks a lot !