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Haiku Glimpses

Sand castles Seashore artifacts; Seagulls for company Morning fitness run Winding jogging track; Pulse of adrenaline Salty sea breeze Coconut palms sway; Stray voices unfurl Flower carpet Yellow and red hues; Jogging track surprise Seaside horizon Sun and sand and mist; Nature makes pictures Piquant conversations Seafront gathering; Message in skyline

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Skat A

Date: 5/24/2015 12:48:00 AM

beautiful. SK

Leon Enriquez
Date: 5/27/2015 8:02:00 AM

Dear Skat: Thank you. Leon

Mario De Paz

Date: 2/11/2014 8:47:00 AM

These haiku glimpses contain good ideas and are expressed in short words as requested by the spirit of haiku. However I think preferable to fit the rule of syllables 5-7-5 because sounds better. Good job anyway.

Leon Enriquez
Date: 2/11/2014 11:11:00 AM

Dear Mario: Thanks once again for the kind feedback. Leon

Monterey Sirak

Date: 2/11/2014 6:26:00 AM

You create beautiful images with your haikus. You have mastered this form, I think

Leon Enriquez
Date: 2/11/2014 8:34:00 AM

Dear Monterey: Thank you. For me, a haiku is a fragment of an experience felt. I can only try to share that moment . Sometimes, the haiku piece works. Still, we can only try, and try again. That's my view. To be a master in this genre is like chasing rainbows! But, thanks again for your encouragement, Monterey. All the best, Leon