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Haiku 75

Haiku 75 sunlight on your face... dark hair splashed on the pillow your smile, your blue eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Skat A
Date: 8/21/2013 1:30:00 PM
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intriguing haiku Jack, makes me want them blue eyes. SKAT
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Jack Jordan
Date: 8/21/2013 1:39:00 PM
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You know I'll bet that you can have any color you want with the proper contact lenses. I confess that I waffled between blue (my color) and green, which I think is truly beautiful. Choices, choices... Jack
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 8/16/2013 9:49:00 AM
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beautiful Jack, a smile will always do... xox...Linda
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Jack Jordan
Date: 8/16/2013 10:12:00 AM
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Most of the time...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2013 2:20:00 PM
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... yes, I have blue eyes.... :))) - Love it, Jack ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Jack Jordan
Date: 8/13/2013 5:17:00 PM
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I debated blue, green or brown. Blue just seemed the prettiest, although green eyes are very special. Jack
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Donna Jones
Date: 8/13/2013 6:04:00 AM
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Charming Jack
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Jack Jordan
Date: 8/13/2013 8:18:00 AM
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Thanks, Donna... Jack
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Poet Tacito
Date: 8/12/2013 8:50:00 AM
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Absolutely charming! Cherishing the simple pleasures.
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Jack Jordan
Date: 8/12/2013 9:18:00 AM
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Often simple pleasures are the best, and the most lasting as memories.

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