Haiku 74

squirrel upon the roof house hunting mouse at the door cat waits fall leaves cascade soft carpet

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/2/2018 4:07:00 PM

phyl, love the word choices and images of your ku... keep them coming; wow!..huggs

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/12/2018 11:39:00 AM

Thanks Nette . Ku is one of the forms I keep having trouble with but working on it. Have a great weekend. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/2/2018 12:19:00 PM

- The cat is doing his job ... poor mice :) - Lovely dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/12/2018 11:37:00 AM

Yes having a cat will do the job nicely. love phyl

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/30/2018 10:03:00 PM

This is so sweet! For me is just says "Canada"

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/12/2018 11:36:00 AM

Thanks and yes sounds like us for sure. Leaves have almost all fallen and frost on the car windows. Not liking thoughts of winter. love phyl