Haiku

Crumbs browning As grains of sand fall – Sunshine runs

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/1/2012 8:01:00 AM

I have enjoyed reading your excellent writing this morning Jemmy. I hope you will continue to write and share your words with us. Have a wonderful weekend filled with joy and love. Love, Carol

Jemmy Farmer
Date: 6/2/2012 4:22:00 PM

Thank you Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/31/2012 5:45:00 PM

Hello, Jemmy ;-) I find your haiku, to be time consuming. I love the ending punch line,, , this sure has haiku written, all the way. Thank you always..PD.

Jemmy Farmer
Date: 6/2/2012 4:22:00 PM

Thank you PD

David Williams

Date: 5/31/2012 4:31:00 PM

Jemmy, good haiku..David

Jemmy Farmer
Date: 6/2/2012 4:22:00 PM

Thank you David