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Haiku - Alone With the Moon

vacant eyes glisten behind the window pane alone with the moon

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Wilma Neels

Date: 4/2/2017 10:58:00 AM

Stunning Charma! mesmerizing.. Enjoyed this. Hope your are enjoying your weekend. love Wilma

Maria Williams

Date: 3/31/2017 5:28:00 AM

I watch the moon from my window too Charmaine, it's mesmerising. Great haiku

White Wolf

Date: 3/31/2017 4:38:00 AM

A superb haiku, with great imagery! 7/7

John Lawless

Date: 3/30/2017 9:03:00 PM

Oh...been there...and to the places those moments take one. Nicely done Charmaine

Constance La France

Date: 3/30/2017 4:43:00 PM

Charmaine, wonderful I could see myself in a trance looking at the moon~

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/30/2017 4:26:00 PM

What a great Haiku. It leaves the reader seeing the scene and wondering about it. I like how you did this Charmaine.

Chris Green

Date: 3/30/2017 3:50:00 PM

Enchanting and mesmerizing and everything else in between. So soft and alluring my sweet friend, this Haiku is so dream like.

Tim Smith

Date: 3/30/2017 3:32:00 PM

What an amazing image Charma....love it