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Guitarists' Language

I tell you my secrets through the hums Of buzzing, stringed bees The rumblings of my thumb I pretend to play it all with ease My memories seem to wane But my fingers know their place A screech, a murmur, a twang Suffocating, sweet, in our airy space What words I cannot find, What I cannot seem to say, Are the things I hope remind Us of the songs that make us sway Mahogany and copper speak In softer languages than I ever could So I’ll strum until my wrist is weak Until we’ve both been understood

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Date: 5/5/2024 9:26:00 AM
Citlali, congratulations on your winning placement and sharing your hobby of guitar playing.
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Date: 4/28/2024 8:23:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your guitarist's thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 4/27/2024 10:34:00 AM
I'm not a guitarist but I've been around enough to know that this is a very well written poem. Welcome to poetrysoup!
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