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Grappling With Gratitude

GRAPPLING WITH GRATITUDE Oh Gratitude,  Gentle as a butterfly. You alight upon my emotional reverie to birth my questioning. You have risen as an inward glow  of unexpected proportions, ready to bleed silently into my emotional pores.  Oh Gratitude, , I sense your presence, your cautious ambivalence that yearns to express some mystical feeling of unknown origin. You pull and play inside my mind like chimes against an autumn wind. Oh Gratitude,  Can I truly appreciate the acrobatic dance so easily played, that allows me to indulge in nature's grand banquet? And if so, shall I now, in repetition, repeat phrases that glorify and recognize the splendor of existence; or, do I ignore, the bounty of a creation little understood? Oh Gratitude,  Should I dismiss your pretentiousness, those gaily colored brush strokes of memory frescoes embedded on the walls of my mind? Or will you, gratitude, be the expressions of thoughts confined to a limited time; all held in hostage to a holiday season’s heightened senses of roasting fowl curried with fragrant flavors? Oh Gratitude,  When the holiday day is done and I am appeased, will I still commemorate the theology of my brethren who suggest I thank my creator with 100 daily blessings? CAK 11-13-2013

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Date: 12/27/2013 3:38:00 PM
Allan,. Hope you had a wonderful Christmas with family. - Thanks for sharing the gratitude. Much pleasant reading this... xox..Linda
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Allan Koven
Date: 12/27/2013 4:00:00 PM
Linda, thanks for your well wishes. My holiday came a little earlier. Will always look forward to reading the colorful, delightful landscapes of your poetic mind. Allan
Date: 12/22/2013 10:06:00 AM
Gratitude just obtained a front row ticket in my heart, thanks to your majestic pen for which I express my.....gratitude. Stellar work, Allan chuck
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Allan Koven
Date: 12/22/2013 3:10:00 PM
Chuck, love your way with words. Thank you for visiting. You may appreciated Once Again 2014. Have a great year. Allan
Date: 12/9/2013 4:23:00 PM
That was fantastic. An enjoyable ride full of style and images that leave the mind reeling with ecstasy.
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Allan Koven
Date: 12/9/2013 6:00:00 PM
Thank you, Scott. It's nice to know my confusion leads to images that are understood. Allan
Date: 11/17/2013 1:24:00 PM
The images you created here are masterful. It is easy sometimes to take things for granted and forget to be grateful.
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Date: 11/17/2013 12:58:00 PM
A catch 22? It's a momentary feeling but when truly felt, do not feign. A really good one
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