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Goodbye Smoking

I'm not smoking today ; not that the urge has gone away. It's just that I'm tight and smokes are high ; but, clothes are cheaper, I won't deny. I'd like to be known for my wit and charm ; instead of an odor setting off a fire alarm. Believe me, it's not easy; but, with a cigarette, I look sleazy ! I have an image to uphold ; I'm known to be brave and even bold. But, those little, white, sticks of fire ; have always been part of my attire. Will people even know me now; without the smoke circling my brow ? Grit my teeth, gnaw my tongue ; clean my hair and clear my lungs. I might even feel brand new ; and smell like perfume, not fish stew. So, wish me well, no more Pall Mall ; and pray I do not have a fall. For this will be my very last try ; to say it's easy, is a BIG, FAT lie !!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/14/2010 8:27:00 AM
BRAVO Gail.. I kicked the habit in my twenties and never looked back... enjoyed your lines I so related to luv... happy Sunday..SOUP MAIL..
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Date: 9/9/2010 3:26:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your impressive poetry today Gail. Have not read for almost a week now. I had a wonderful vacation. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2010 9:27:00 AM
I too am trying to quit so I can certainly relate to this poem..Loved it Gail..Take care ~Deb
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Date: 9/9/2010 9:14:00 AM
Sounds like someone I know, lol, no offense. This is definately going in to my favorite poems. enjoyed every line! They brought smiles to my face. ,..love it,..p.d.
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Date: 9/9/2010 9:08:00 AM
LOL.....Awesome Write and good luck my friend.....Larry
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