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Goodbye

I was asleeped lying on the floor, And adorned with lovely flowers; Peculiar things were there, When with a core heart they bathed me in a blessing showers: I don't know what the strange things were going at my house; Like an infant, I was upraised on shoulders; Each and everyone was there, All those who loves me, were with lots of loving rose to bid me Goodbye, mere: Indeed each and everyone who loves me was there; . Still, I was called by their mouth with shriek diluted with deep torment fear; All of them flowed tears, Causes profound calmness instead of fear. Who never wants to pluck my face, on that day was there; With an embellished loving heart; How can I be loved and tributed by thy mouths and hearts? How can I? This induces in my eyes materialistic fear. I don't know, why they had stunned by my calm face; Why they astonished by seeing me asleeped? ; Oh! With a groaning and deep torment, Why were they awaking me from my dreams of peep? : Each phase and soul, Starts wobbling there, by seeing me; Where I was made asleeped forever; Those who had a strong love for me, From those hands, I was made buried forever and ever!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/19/2024 4:30:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/20/2016 1:47:00 PM
anand, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/20/2015 1:56:00 PM
AZITEJ, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 5/23/2015 1:56:00 AM
Sad write Azitej, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/23/2015 12:54:00 AM
Azitej, this is deep, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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