Goodbye

Goodbye Mom, my two older brothers cried.
1930 – I was born, our mother died.
1932 - Daddy remarried, careworn
yet in time three more daughters were born.

Goodbye, peace and home, So long, 
1941, Japan attacked British Hong Kong,
the day after they attacked Pearl Harbor.
We all had to leave, Dad stayed, the martyr.

Goodbye, Daddy, he remained in Kowloon.
1942, his life was taken, way too soon
In Santo Tomas, were the rest of his clan
1942, in prison, my youngest sister’s life began.

Goodbye, to friends who were starved to death;
so close we came to our own last breath.
1945, wrought our liberation
then we found out that Daddy was gone.

Goodbye, Philippines, Goodbye China.
Eight refugees headed to Canada,
where mom’s folks met their new kin.
Seven children just about did them in.

Goodbye, Grams, shouting Hosanna,
praise God, he sent us to Indiana.
Mom got a job at a children’s home;
no longer would we have to roam.
 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Goodbye, Mother. She was ninety-seven,
2002, when God called her to heaven.
All seven children alive, with grandkids galore, 
we know her new home will offer much more.

February 23, 2023

contest:  Writing Challenge G Words
sponsor:  Constance La France


*Santo Tomas was a university in Manila used a Japanese prison camp 
during WW II housing 3,785 prisoners.  This poem is a sequel to my earlier piece, Funeral, just posted February 17, 2023.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 3/2/2023 12:15:00 AM
Reason, such a sad goodbye poem, which I imagine is not fiction, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - G Words, well done, blessings, Constance
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Date: 2/25/2023 11:37:00 AM
- Many sad goodbyes, R.A.P. - Great written - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 2/25/2023 4:06:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine. True story of a friend
Date: 2/24/2023 7:48:00 PM
A very beautiful story is written through this poem of goodbye. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/25/2023 4:08:00 PM
Thank you, Christuraj. It is one worth telling for all seven children and their mom/stepmom. God is good; Sara told me they sang every night in prison - "God Will Take Care of You." And He did.
Date: 2/24/2023 5:25:00 PM
Yes a massive WOW here, this poem should be archived, the subject material is superb, also the presentation.
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Date: 2/25/2023 4:15:00 PM
Thank you, Harry. I appreciate your supportive comment. The youngest daughter did write the story of her mother's life. Available on Amazon - Frontier Girl by A. Ruth Chastain.
Date: 2/24/2023 2:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!!  What a story/write. Your pen was working overtime on this one. Have a great/blessed day writing away............................
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Date: 2/25/2023 4:18:00 PM
Thank you, Paula, it was a needed write for me as I loved Sara like a sister. She was originally Sarah but loved to tell folks how her step-mother beat the "h" out of her and she changed it to Sara. In jest, but she described herself as a rebellious child. Have a great day.
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