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Glow of the Embers

The glow of last embers now gone neither flicker nor flame greets the dawn Nighttime fires once more put to rout ~ first daylight rays straggle out

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Date: 12/17/2022 3:48:00 PM
Morning has broken, like the first dawning....yep, that's the first thing I thought of when I read this.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/17/2022 4:38:00 PM
Ah! That's the song I was trying to think of, believe it or not. Who sang it?
Date: 12/14/2022 6:03:00 AM
hey, even the sun goes out an parties this time of year.....nice one Gershon..smooth
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/14/2022 8:40:00 PM
Keep smiling, John.
Date: 12/14/2022 2:15:00 AM
Love this melodic write so skillfully you paint the picture I can smell it!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/14/2022 8:36:00 PM
Glad you can sense this one, Karen. ~ Ole Factory Nirv

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