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Glory of the Uniform

Well organized organisms are wary of defense these shields defy all odds to justify the integrity of our borders the enemy’s need to conquer and the drive to dominate is stopped b’cos with the men in uniform, great cities are fortified. Sworn to be dedicated back room boys their sacrifices have made livelihood well simplified, every soldier’s fall magnifies our strength and existence each and every salute dignifies the country’s reputation. The quest to penetrate border and envelope lands are questioned b’cos with the last drop of blood, they’ll nullify all antigens placed as utmost priority, even the ants can comprehend nothing can therefore falsify the commitment of these men. A nation’s defense scales its survival every victory intensifies each citizen’s patriotic passion a country’s posterity lies on each sweat-soaked uniform, their mortality is crucified, while someone else-glorified. The oneness of the country can testify with every of its citizens fully satisfied. Diplomacy has kept the battle field’s frequency modified but history of victories already beautifies our coat of arm With the structure of nationhood so diversified, the zenith of their zeal has kept us unified the globe has been notified of such a powerful drive, keeping our enemies and rivals completely horrified.

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Date: 10/30/2015 7:26:00 PM
Amazing verse Funom. My favorite lines: "a country’s posterity lies on each sweat-soaked uniform, their mortality is crucified, while someone else-glorified." All in all, absolutely beautiful writing here! Always, Laura
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 11:56:00 AM
Thank you a million Laura
Date: 10/13/2015 6:13:00 PM
Sir, your sense of honor is admirable. Thank-you kindly for the comment you left. I also like the work you create.
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 11:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Duke
Date: 10/2/2015 6:58:00 AM
Funom, Did for 29 years as Personal Administrator and Recruiter in National Guard. It is such a great training and development tool as well as being employer of last resort. Jim Horn
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Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 7:03:00 AM
WOW! Great to know James... Thanks alot for your input
Date: 9/1/2015 7:52:00 AM
I prefer to don my uniform and wage war on microorganisms, but the intention is the same. I do what I can to stop the unseen from destroying the human condition. Great write Funom.
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Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 7:04:00 AM
Thank you so much scott
Date: 8/31/2015 3:31:00 PM
Hi Funom: Congratulations on your articulation of the wearing of the uniform. My compliments. Sooner or later, everyone wears a uniform.
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Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 7:04:00 AM
loool! Yeah Sergi... Thank you so much for your inputs
Date: 8/25/2015 7:54:00 PM
gee not me in no uniform but join for a revolution and enemy not horrified as we're all friends
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Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 7:05:00 AM
lol! Yeah Catherine.. You are so right. Thanks for your comment
Date: 8/6/2015 8:23:00 AM
Wearing uniform is also one way of showing a nation's identity. Excellent write my dear friend. I enjoyed thoroughly the read this evening. Thank you so much! love lots and big hug, Leonora
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Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 7:05:00 AM
Thank you so much for your romancing words Leonora...
Date: 8/1/2015 9:29:00 AM
Every country has a right to wear it's uniform, and taste freedom with in it's borders while those that need to expand, should be aware,every uniform as a right to defend..love the poetry Funom..
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Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 7:06:00 AM
Thank you so much harry... Your words couldn't be less truthful
Date: 7/30/2015 10:57:00 AM
FM , nothing more noble than wearing the uniform of ones country A7 and thanks for visiting my poem, the war dead
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Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 7:08:00 AM
So so so true, broken Wings.. I really appreciate your comment
Date: 7/27/2015 2:58:00 PM
And they wear it so well, for the great work they do. The uninform, a nation's symbol of strength. Great write!
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Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 7:07:00 AM
Yeah Njeri... They do wear it so well. Thank you for your input

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