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girl's playful sundress matching hot pink sunglasses ~ tea time with her dolls AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Posted on May 27, 2018

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Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 5/28/2018 11:52:00 AM

Very cute and amusing.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/28/2018 2:38:00 PM

Thanks, Dale. Much appreciated.

Mick Talbot

Date: 5/28/2018 2:22:00 AM

Great haiku, love the twist, remember having a family picnic where the blanket was put over a red ants nest, we all got stung!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/28/2018 9:32:00 AM

Oops. They were there first ! Thanks for your lovely visit and comment. I feel itchy all of a sudden...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/27/2018 6:07:00 PM

Makes me smile!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/27/2018 8:56:00 PM

Thanks, Kim, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/27/2018 4:09:00 PM

darn ants

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/27/2018 8:55:00 PM

Keeps kiddies amused. LOL