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in the break of dawn there was that moment i felt loved and all was right with the world in the shuffle of chaos there was that moment i felt peace and time hovered as if standing still in the midst of night there was that moment i felt serene and hope took root in my heart AP: 3rd place 2023 Posted on December 31, 2022

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P.S. Awtry

Date: 1/1/2023 9:35:00 PM

finely, elegantly woven :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/2/2023 7:27:00 AM

Thanks for your much apprecitaed visit and comment ~

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/1/2023 5:23:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this. Also, thanks for your friendship. With prayer, I greet you with the bliss, serenity and triumph of New Year 2023 along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/1/2023 8:06:00 AM

Thanks for the goodness you exude with your every word ~ all the best to you in 2023 !!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/1/2023 4:38:00 AM

Lovely, Line, happy new year!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/1/2023 8:05:00 AM

Thanks, Jo ~ Happy New Year to you and yours !

Ann Peck

Date: 12/31/2022 11:47:00 AM

Such a beautiful, soft poem, Line. I love especially, "and time hovered as if standing still."

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/31/2022 1:38:00 PM

thank you very much, Ann ~