Frost

on a chill morning a crisp sheet of white frosting coating the paddocks 29 December 2022 Poetry soup syllable counter

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/5/2023 4:41:00 PM

Julie, congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. A great verse. Many blessings to you

Julie Draper
Date: 1/5/2023 5:37:00 PM

Thanks very much Eve :) happy new year to you :)

Arlo Parker

Date: 1/4/2023 7:31:00 PM

Delightful vision to ponder, Miss Julie. Congrats. ;o]

Julie Draper
Date: 1/4/2023 7:40:00 PM

Thanks very much :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/4/2023 4:18:00 PM

Julie, wonderful imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!

Julie Draper
Date: 1/4/2023 4:55:00 PM

Wow, that's awesome, thank you Tania :) I'm really enjoying attempting haiku, so that's really encouraging :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/28/2022 9:19:00 PM

Hi Julie, this is very picturesque, I can see white fields and perhaps a horse or two in the distance?

Julie Draper
Date: 1/2/2023 5:17:00 PM

Thanks Michelle :) actually, there is a white horse in the paddock next door that belongs to the neighbours!