From Pebble To Ocean:

All is in motion From pebble to ocean Naught lies still. /|\

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Paloma P

Date: 10/18/2016 7:10:00 PM

Little poem with a potent punch. Could pertain to so much of life. Do you mind me asking what are these? /|\ Just curious. :)

Paloma P
Date: 10/18/2016 7:45:00 PM

So that's your muse, very cool, thanks for sharing the info.

White Wolf
Date: 10/18/2016 7:24:00 PM

Same as my avatar /|\ is the Awen. Awen is Welsh, Cornish, and Breton for (poetic) inspiration. It is a Druidic symbol. It is very deep in Druidry. /|\

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/12/2016 3:00:00 PM

Excellent maiden voyage, Rick. A real good senryu/haiku. Very cool, relaxing imagery. It was very meditative. Nice job. I just posted my first haiku as well. Just like you, I'm amazed at the various forms. Me, I'm just a simple message poet. A poet of the people, if you will. Keep up the good work. Love you, friend.

White Wolf
Date: 10/12/2016 6:21:00 PM

Thanks for that Freddie, and love to you and yours as well my friend /|\