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Friendship To Loneliness

The sky in silvery blue veil, and The moon; Peering from the white silk foam of the clouds, Below its territory In a long white gown Staring at her footsteps, Beauty Walking to the gigantic cliff along the shore Is she waiting for fulfillment of her burning desires? Or is leaving things all behind? Without expression of fear or joy She throws a pebble into the sea Splash raised the waves in the air then back And the pain From friendship to loneliness again

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Daver Austin

Date: 3/29/2016 2:54:00 PM

Kind of a Moon wave, yes? I like the imagery. Had to read it several times. Congrats, daver

Muqudus Shahab
Date: 3/31/2016 12:31:00 AM

thanks :)

Skat A

Date: 3/20/2016 11:13:00 PM

Muqudus S., Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Muqudus Shahab
Date: 3/21/2016 1:49:00 AM

Hi... I am literature student and want to understand different genre of literature but I like poetry the most as it held a lot of meaning and poets have beautiful way to convey their thinking... It is great to have new poet friends here ... Thank you ... Hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/19/2016 2:52:00 PM

- Thank you for your first poem,Muqudus :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/19/2016 9:30:00 AM

Muqudus, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Muqudus Shahab
Date: 3/19/2016 10:58:00 AM

I would like to hear your views on my every poem. I've read some of your poems they are awesome and thanks for your support and appreciation.