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Freely Discoursing My Concourse

Concourse with no passenger limits Un-restricted access to all corridors Freely navigating space and time Winding aimlessly along each meter Easy, un-restrained, rhythmless strides No pattern to my steps Pausing for no apparent reason Deliberately browsing through each strand Informally addressing every subject I meet Disconnected from the discourse around me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/1/2010 5:29:00 AM
Congrates on having your poem featured this week Stephen nicely done love Jayne
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:21:00 AM
hello! Stephen, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d."
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:21:00 AM
STEPHEN, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT
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Date: 9/27/2010 6:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Stephen. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2010 5:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Stephen in John Freeman's contest "Your Free Verse Precept" Love,Carol
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Date: 9/26/2010 2:55:00 PM
"Concourse" I love the imagery. Congratulations on your win in the contest, Stephen! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 9/26/2010 11:56:00 AM
You truly describe the liberties we have in free verse syle, Stephen. Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/26/2010 11:26:00 AM
Freedom to discourse your concourse is what precept is about Stephen. "Congratulations" and thanks for your worthy presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/26/2010 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations on this fine win in the contest, Stephen
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Date: 9/26/2010 10:05:00 AM
Congrats Stephen on your big win in John's contest with these great words so poignant.. enjoy sweet success this happy Sunday with luv..
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