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Free Verse On Love

Your face lays soft on the surface of my mind a deep reflection beneath the shadow of my soul that leaves me smiling in the twilight of life as I wonder about love from long ago that dwells with the lost rainbows sought from love's desires when our eyes melted between ripples of time and lips were formed to feel the breathless moments captured in the palms of love's passion kept in yesterday's misty dreams of hunger filled when warm raindrops were counted as they splashed against the window of the dawn where love hid in seclusion... from the soft golden glow of the sun searching our skins like dewdrops falling from flowered petals opening to embrace the light...caressing us like feathered wings lifting our souls away in gentle flight to another time, another place that's now a jeweled memory I hold close, in the silent glorious intimacy that dwelled in the heart of our love 8/25/18 re-written 2/23/20

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Date: 7/7/2019 10:48:00 PM
Frederic, it was a pleasure to return and reread this exceptional poem again. A tender beauty. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always, dear poet.
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Date: 6/27/2019 9:04:00 AM
This is amazing Frederic congrats on another win. My criteria was from last six months but I guess was not clear in the contest rules, well done!
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Date: 8/31/2018 5:24:00 PM
Frederic, a passionate gem that sparkles with poignant beauty.. such vivid, vibrant and exquisite imagery of lost love regrets.. Layers of superbly expressed melancholy feelings wrapped in your luscious lines.. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/27/2018 8:20:00 AM
Such tender beautiful words..
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Date: 8/25/2018 9:37:00 AM
This is so beautiful...palms of passion, raindrops were counted...I love your descriptions in your expression. :)
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