Forever Remains

Forever Remains

Loving you was like staring at sunlight,
thru to another dimension parallel to ours.
Seeing your silhouette through the doorway
in the background, lavishing your look.

The very thought of you
makes me tremble in my knees!
My heart would race every time,
I'd see you from across the room.

I ached and still long for your touch, 
the very smell of you,
it brings me goosebumps, still! 

My Love, your presence in my life
brought such pureness with it to me.
For the smile upon your face
was so radiant and still is in my heart.
 
For finding me worthy of making a family with,
our children and their bright faces.

My dear Shannon,
you always will be, 
and forever stay in my heart.

Thank you for such radiance; 
Thank you, my Love,
for bringing inspiration to my life!

You Forever Remain, 
My one Love, R.I.P.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 8/7/2021 7:24:00 AM
William, your poem is so beautiful and each word drips of love and then at the end that tragic RIP, it broke my heart, wonderful writing ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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William Darnell Sr
Date: 7/17/2022 3:46:00 PM
Constance, Hello! You know, I haven't written to my late wife lately, hmm? And thank you, for your comment and visit last year. I never knew your comment was here. Problem is solved, July, 2022. Haha, Best of Wishes, William
Date: 6/5/2021 11:51:00 AM
Sorry for your loss. It is wonderful though to have loved and been love by someone so very committed. Take care and keep the wonderful memories alive.
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William Darnell Sr
Date: 6/6/2021 6:01:00 PM
Hi, Virginia! It's ok; thank you, though, for your heartfelt sentiments here. I appreciate it! She will always remain alive to me, for my love runs deep for her. She was a beautiful woman inside and out. Best of Wishes, William
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