Forest

The leaves fall slowly Beetles veiled in falls blanket The wind blows gently

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Casarah Nance

Date: 1/8/2015 9:50:00 PM

I can see that perfectly, nicely done.

Shane Cooper
Date: 2/8/2015 3:54:00 PM

Thanks Casarah, again my appogies for not thanking you for the visit earlier. love Shane xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 1/8/2015 9:20:00 PM

Very beautifully written. I see you have talent.

Shane Cooper
Date: 1/8/2015 9:28:00 PM

Thank you, i think i posted it too soon though i have a revised version that i will repost tomorrow. love Shane

David Meade

Date: 1/7/2015 10:12:00 PM

I enjoyed your haiku -- self-sustaining nature! 7

Shane Cooper
Date: 1/7/2015 10:15:00 PM

Thank you David, I have been reading a few by Jan Allison and thought i would try my hand at one. Have a great day.