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She who appreciates the little things The effortless gifts that life can bring She who sees beauty in a stranger’s smile A hand written letter a fresh hair style Her dreams of travelling still just desires Through her journey of life she has done what’s required She who deserves a whole lot more Could loose hours in an old book store But there never seems time to just be her Each whirlwind day passes as a blur Yet she still takes delight in sand between toes A Green light at crossings Fresh Footprints on snow has no idea of the lives she has touched To many she has been a crutch She who has wished a thousand wishes But finds gratitude from her grandchild’s kisses Inside I’m aware she’s fighting her tears Saved up from many lonely years Thinking nobody really sees her at all “ Have I ever been free ?” She cannot recall But I can hear her silent sorrow And vow to brighten her tomorrows Because I can see there’s so much more Locked behind her guarded door

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/20/2019 2:54:00 AM
Such a beautiful, soulful poem, El! It brought bittersweet tears of sadness and joy. For it back fond remembrance of my beloved mum, who passed away in '13. You are a true poet ... you possess the radiant gift of emotional illumination. Yours words shine w/shimmering ink empathy. Breathtaking poetry, per usual from your talented pen. Love and best wishes for the holiday. Romantic Warrior
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 4/28/2020 3:29:00 AM
Thank you so much Freddie and I’m so sorry to hear about your mum. Sending love x
Date: 11/16/2019 5:03:00 PM
Your Mum sounds great!.. so open up that locked door you..... go find more happiness together... this is such a lovely tribute to your Mum, but I wish you both lots of fun... Together x DAMO
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 4/28/2020 3:28:00 AM
Thanks Damian, she is :-) x
Date: 11/12/2019 6:55:00 AM
- Beautiful written to your mother, Elaine ... miss my mom ... she died 6 years ago - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 11/13/2019 6:01:00 AM
I’m so sorry to hear that Anne-Lise. Sending hugs and thank you for the visit xx
Date: 10/25/2019 2:05:00 AM
That is a wonderful poem ! Really touched me !! Beautifully written !
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/25/2019 7:19:00 AM
That’s so nice to hear! Thank you for your kind words :-) x
Date: 10/13/2019 2:04:00 PM
Sweet tribute.
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/17/2019 7:03:00 AM
Thank you James :-) x
Date: 10/11/2019 7:17:00 AM
A really nice tribute to all that mothers do and yours in particular. I just lost my mom in June, she was a saint and that is not just hyperbole. She and my father raised ten loving children. :)
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/13/2019 7:56:00 AM
Hi Phil I’m so sorry to hear of your loss, wow ten children! She must have been a saint. I’m sure you are all a credit to her. Thank you for your lovely words, sending hugs x
Date: 9/29/2019 9:14:00 AM
A heartfelt tribute... Sad how our loved ones change and hide pain... beautiful poem..
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/29/2019 11:49:00 AM
Thank you Silent one :-) x
Date: 9/28/2019 1:37:00 PM
A lovely write...
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/29/2019 3:19:00 AM
Thank you :-) x
Date: 9/28/2019 10:46:00 AM
This is simply beautiful and I believe your MUM would treasure it dearly. I love it. Such a wonderful poem. God bless you
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/28/2019 11:06:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words Regina :-) x

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