Fly Away

I want to fly away higher and higher, \I want to show you a new desire. \If you'd be with me you would see, how \wonderfulful our lives could be. \Dont turn around just stop. If you turn \around, i will prove our lve is enough. \Just give me one chance and i'll show you \real, true, romance.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/29/2015 10:24:00 PM

Pamela, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/24/2015 6:20:00 PM

Hi Pamela, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita

Skat A

Date: 11/23/2015 10:55:00 PM

Pamela, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT