Flicker of Love


I want to get lost with you
in a valley of singing sunflowers,
where I wish they bloom
as your luminous laughter in immortal hues.
My butterfly heart wants to flutter
chasing you across cashmere cascades,
as this aching to melt into each other
courses free as mercury in me.
I want you to tease me with bittersweet nothings,
while your silken voice allures me to peace.
Will you keep this flicker of love alive
inside of my heart till the day we die,
yet this passion pouring sweetness
remains like day one until we rise again to meet.
I want to paint our soulful saga
with heavenly grace upon gleaming gates of eternity.
You, me, and ensemble of our eternal love.
I want to miss heart beats with you - 
always and forever,
you are the reason of my life and existence.

~Ayesh


A poem inspired by the Statue of Ali and Nino (Statue of Love) : A sculpture by Tamara Kvesitadze located in Batumi, Georgia.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 12/20/2023 7:48:00 PM
"I want to miss heartbeats with you..." What a uniquely sweet line. I'm glad you came here Ayesha and added your beautiful poetic voice to Poetry Soup
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Ayesha Iqbal
Date: 12/26/2023 12:33:00 AM
Aww thank you so much for your lovely support always
Date: 12/19/2023 12:16:00 PM
My sister your poem is a breathtaking journey into the realms of love and desire, painted with the vibrant hues of sunflowers and the melody of passion... The metaphor of a valley of singing sunflowers are enchanting, creating a setting where your desire for the timeless beauty of love unfolds.. The closing lines, expressing the wish to miss heartbeats together always and forever, convey a timeless commitment and significance of love. Your poem is a testament to the enduring power of love...
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Ayesha Iqbal
Date: 12/26/2023 12:35:00 AM
Thank you so much for this great feedback my dear brother.. it means a lot coming from you!
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