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Flee bad habits, my plea

Though warned to stop smoking and drinking beer, Why should I quit things that give me such joy? So much wise advice I refused to hear. All good things of life I vowed to enjoy. But when I was told I had lung cancer, And my liver scarred with cirrhosis. Without the doctor giving the answer, To my question, I guessed the prognosis. I'm tied to survival with a thin thread, My vibrant past now fades like a mirage, Instead, imminent death is what I dread. My life wracked with pains, no balm to assuage. I finally constructed my life a mess, Chaos now lives deep inside my body, Causing my heart a serious distress. Flee bad habits, my plea to somebody.

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Date: 2/6/2025 6:34:00 PM
Oh my if this is true, you must feel so terrible. I liked your emotive poem on this topic.
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Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 2/6/2025 9:56:00 PM
Thanks Andrea for your comment and the time taken to read my poems. God bless. It's not about my personal experience, it is just a poem written based on my knowledge of the condition. Thanks.

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