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Flashes of Lightning

Lover #1- Gentlemans Haiku Flashes of Lightning Reveal her honey skintone I graze her softly Lover #2- Ladies Tanka I close my eyes light Surrender to his Embrace Feel our hearts balance As desire makes them race Beside him, I take my place ~Miranda Lambert~ **contest: Love Talks by Debbie Guzzi**

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/13/2011 8:34:00 AM
A lovely entry Miranda with unique dialogue to compliment both forms used luv.. sorry it did not place in the contest ..mine only received an HM and it is disheartening but we continue to enter all the contests for the joy of the Poetry .. hope u will read my new poem and new blog today ..."for the POETRY" ... thankxxx..
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Date: 3/11/2011 4:39:00 PM
Best wishes in Deb's contest with this creative write, Miranda. Soup mail in a second. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/9/2011 1:52:00 PM
thats deep really good poem
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