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Five Days Until Freedom

Five days until freedom In the stillness of the room, shadows stretch like whispered dreams, the clock ticks heavy on the wall, each second a sigh, each minute a memory. Day one: I trace the dust on forgotten books, words once alive now silenced, like voices lost in a crowd that never came. Day two: the window cracks open to a world that dances just beyond reach, laughter echoing through bars made of longing and sorrow. Day three: I fold my thoughts into paper boats, set them adrift in the silence, watch them sink, each wave a reminder of absence. Day four: the heart learns to hold its own weight, as the walls whisper tales of a land unseen, of freedom just beyond the horizon. Day five: I breathe the air thick with unspoken hopes, and feel the pulse of the earth, each beat a promise, each pause a question. Until freedom comes, I remain a shadow, waiting for the dawn to unveil the light, and the echo of my name to finally find its home. By Jay Kirk Age 15

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Date: 12/20/2024 12:11:00 PM
What an amazing poem. I especially liked the lines "I fold my thoughts into paper boats, set them adrift in the silence, watch them sink, each wave a reminder of absence." ...so good!
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Date: 10/10/2024 5:10:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 10/7/2024 12:03:00 PM
well expressed this - nicely done
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Date: 10/7/2024 6:16:00 AM
Anguish so vividly portrayed, enjoyed this superbly crafted write
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