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Fish With a Wish

Splish! Splash! Went the little goldfish. As she flipped, and she flopped, right out of her dish. Hiss-s-s-s! Hiss-s-s-s! across the room, came a threatening sound. And she wished, oh, she wished, she was back in her dish! The house cat pranced and swished his tail, as he played with his squeaky toy, and his playmate, little Dale. Then the cat paused. He sniffed the air. He leaped for joy. He smelled a live fish, and not a rubber toy! With a happy prance, on cat feet that danced, across the room, he quickly advanced. But the boy heard the wish! The wish! of his little gold fish. And he flipped, and he flopped her back in her dish. Lucky Fish! Lucky Fish! With a wish!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/8/2014 8:42:00 PM
this poem actually made my day, I wish to read more of your petry, you're a natural. -Whispering plants
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 12/8/2014 8:49:00 PM
And your comments made my day! Thanks so much for the positive feedback. And I look forward to reading more of your poems, too. Darlene
Date: 11/4/2014 3:51:00 AM
very nice to my ears..
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 11/4/2014 6:29:00 AM
And very nice for me to hear! Thanks, rene
Date: 10/20/2014 12:19:00 PM
Great for that childrens book you are going to publish.
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 10/20/2014 12:37:00 PM
I am? Thanks for letting me know!
Date: 10/14/2014 9:28:00 PM
such a cute poem.. :D!!! i love the images played a cat came as there is the warning of death for the fish.. :)
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 10/15/2014 4:42:00 PM
Thanks, Olive, for commenting on my poem. I'm glad you liked the images I used. And the little boy must have looked like a super hero to that otherwise doomed fish. Hugs, Darlene
Date: 10/12/2014 7:46:00 AM
Little fish in dish,...enjoyed reading.Wishes.
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 10/12/2014 8:29:00 AM
And this little fish thanks you. Hope you have a good day. Darlene

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