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Entry for the Deciduous Poetry Contest: Sponsored by:  Craig Cornish 

Then, such a fleeting glimpse I had of thee; eyes caught in passing trains, that summer past. As time, in that moment did morph from fast, to deathly still, the more that we could see into each others eyes with such degree to burn an image in my soul, to last all the tormenting years that since have passed; and I have spent without you close to me. A russet leaf that takes its flight in Fall will not unfold anew come next years Spring instead, dissolve, to feed green shoots to come. Each season watch the tree grow ever tall until, in time, as wills, a child will swing beneath it’s branches, watched by dad, and mom.

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Date: 9/25/2024 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Terry. I agree with Susan this poem is soulful and it is wistful all at the same time. I love the line "a russet leaf that takes its flight in Fall will not unfold anew come next years Spring." What a wonderfully expressed perception. There is such tenderness expressed as the tree grows and matures. Sending you blessings!
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Date: 9/15/2024 9:05:00 PM
Dear Terry, your soulful poem eloquently captures the cycle of life and love. Beautiful, expressive poetry. Congratulations for your success in Craig’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Terry Miller
Date: 9/16/2024 1:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Susan

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