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First Senryu

"Flirting with the Idea" by: Eric L. Boddie I hope you wont think that because I do not blink that I will not wink

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/29/2015 1:27:00 PM

Excellently constructed Senryu with great wit! You are doing great, my friend! Enjoyed the read! Pandita

Eve Roper

Date: 9/13/2015 3:25:00 PM

Eric this is wonderful a7. Broken Wing is write, I learned that the hard way but I'm still learning because they tell me it is suppose to stand on it's own. Hugs Eve

Eric Boddie
Date: 9/14/2015 3:24:00 PM

looks like I learned the hard way too....lol....but so glad I have friends like you 2 to steer me in the right direction....;)

Constance La France

Date: 9/13/2015 1:06:00 PM

Eric . . very nice but I think this is a senryu as haiku is always about nature, but I am no expert and I do like it a lot and thanks for visiting my poem, father . . . Yes I was very lucky to have this wonderful man as a father~~

Eric Boddie
Date: 9/14/2015 3:23:00 PM

thank you so much bw....I have made my necessary corrections....still I am glad you like these words too....;)