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First Kiss

She felt the soft brush of the grass upon her fingers as she tripped amongst the lazy Spring meadow. Her faint flesh blush, vibrant, aglow from the sweet cider she had sipped of the long forbidden wineglass. The moist dew trailed along her wrist as the morning haze draped her gown exposing her delicate youth and the inexorable truth; it’s easy for a girl to drown in love’s first forbidden soft kiss.

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Date: 5/15/2024 12:26:00 PM
Congratulation on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "First Kiss" write. Somethings one will always remember. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away............
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Terry Miller
Date: 5/16/2024 2:47:00 AM
Thank you so much Paula
Date: 5/15/2024 12:01:00 PM
Dear terry miller, what i love about this poem is the simplicity and the flow of emotions and depth of what youv conveyed here so effortlessly! And that last line really hits strong and is so true! Very well written poem. Some creative and brilliant rhymes too. Pleasure reading this! Congratulations on your win. Well deserved
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Terry Miller
Date: 5/16/2024 2:47:00 AM
Thank you so much for the placement, your too kind comments and for running this contest
Date: 3/7/2024 4:34:00 PM
...and it is. Very nicely written verse.
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Terry Miller
Date: 3/8/2024 1:32:00 AM
Thank you so much for your visit, and kind words

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