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In the dawn, when the setting sun scattered it's colors The moon sprinkled him with glitters: And for the first time she saw him in the gleaming moonlight... In his eyes she lost herself, Her heart skipped a beat, And she hushed herself, She fall head over heels in love with him...

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Date: 9/18/2024 5:23:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 4/16/2018 12:51:00 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, Manu - keep up the wonderful work, my friend - "A writer writes - always!"
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Manu Ranjini
Date: 4/20/2018 4:19:00 AM
Thank you for your valuable comment, it means a lot to me, Gregory
Date: 4/9/2018 4:58:00 PM
How beautiful is love at first glance Manu. Congratulations on your placement.
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Manu Ranjini
Date: 4/9/2018 10:47:00 PM
Thankyou Jean :)
Date: 4/8/2018 9:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Manu! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Manu Ranjini
Date: 4/9/2018 2:48:00 PM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 4/8/2018 7:19:00 PM
Beautiful, Manu. Congrats on your placement.
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Manu Ranjini
Date: 4/9/2018 2:49:00 PM
Thank you Line.

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