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Fire of Eye

fire of eye doth burn the soul, hot kisses, damning hot to hold, melting of the burnished gold, see it in the mind of eye, a sissling of the eye pig stye, a mercy killing bye n by, all done by dentist drill, a little touch of over-kill, did Santa Claus come by? inspired by Russell Sivey 'Your eyes' Don

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Date: 7/24/2012 2:54:00 PM
What a clever write my friend! Your take of my write is very interesting! How funny you put Santa Claus within your wonderful write! I just love this poem Don! How glorious! Great Work!!
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Date: 7/24/2012 5:51:00 AM
Oh Don, is this about a pycho Santa Claus? Sad and cruel happenings, I'm probably off track?!Where there be peace or war, one can find this "Fire of Eye".:( You no the silly one Don, I be the confused and silly one!:) Best wishes, Mikki
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Date: 7/24/2012 4:05:00 AM
Good and cute Don.....like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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