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Finish My Poem - The Butterfly

As she drinks nectar from a flower, sweetness from heaven falls like dew   anointed with a gentle rain amidst sun showers she appears as if on cue   Lifting her wings she lands on a Zinnia beneath a tinted sky of April blue  flight of fancy fanning fast, fabulous marvel, she is beauty true on true Tis the vernal hour when nature's luster peaks and winter dirges no more wend. Airy notes from feathered breasts, dutiful drones, bejeweled butterflies ascend. Upon the indigo daze of an afternoon, my angel in lepidopteran disguise danced along this florid patch with plush pirouettes, calling "Rose, arise!" "Still here, a bloom to seek and hold." Groggy, dolt, my petals of discontent... quiet cold stole my blush, then by cruel degrees, I learned snow's resentment. But in a sun-lit-breeze ballet, God as big as the butterfly, weighing like nothing revealed the signs of a world renewed, and ushered me thru the rite of spring.

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Date: 4/6/2025 10:08:00 AM
You're a true poet Treener. I think Rose will love what you've done here
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Trina Layne
Date: 4/7/2025 7:59:00 PM
Thank you, Tom.
Date: 4/6/2025 12:06:00 AM
Beautiful poem Trina. The imagery is excellent.
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Trina Layne
Date: 4/6/2025 12:17:00 AM
Thank you. I must commend Mystic Rose Rose for this one. The start is all hers. I supplied the last four couplets.

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