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Finis Vitae

The end has now come Once lucid eyes dulled Shallow breaths begin Food and drink have ceased Sleep is now constant Bowels shut down Pulse becomes faint Bluish-hued skin Grimace of pain Eyes roll back Body cools Moans softly With love Speaks name Gone May 15, 2022 **Side note: This was my first experience with writing a Diminished Hexaverse poem. I thought it was a fun challenge. I chose to write it about the very last moment before death because I watched my maternal grandma take her final breath while in hospice care.

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Date: 5/18/2022 8:19:00 AM
A vivid description of the last moments of life, nicely done, Courtney, perhaps you could write another to go with it describing the first moments of life. John
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Courtney Hubbert
Date: 5/18/2022 11:27:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely words. I will in fact work on that one today. Many thanks for the suggestion.

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