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Fini Takes a Lover

I haven't the heart to tell her, and love takes many forms, so who am I to judge, and who would I be, if I ripped it away? so I'll wait, until she gets bored, or the box disintegrates.

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Date: 5/28/2024 1:15:00 PM
Nice pen Kate, interesting thoughts too. Blessings, Gordon
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Kate Davies
Date: 5/29/2024 11:00:00 AM
Thanks Gordon :)
Date: 5/26/2024 1:37:00 PM
Sometimes, it's good to bite one's tongue. It's a little like watching someone fall over a cliff. I hope she has made a discovering and will move on.
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Date: 5/26/2024 9:29:00 AM
Mmmm... someone takes a lover, and everyone has to adjust. My kids would have me box-less. Cute poem.
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Steven Young
Date: 5/26/2024 7:58:00 PM
And thought it was an online relationship... so... it's kinda like loving a box.
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Kate Davies
Date: 5/26/2024 10:57:00 AM
I should have prefaced it's about my cat and her love for a cardboard box
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Kate Davies
Date: 5/26/2024 10:34:00 AM
I should have prefaced it's about my cat and her love for a cardboard box
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Kate Davies
Date: 5/26/2024 10:33:00 AM
I should have prefaced it's about my cat and her love for a cardboard box

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