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Finding My Strength

Starry Eyed Then One Day Cast Aside There we were, standing still Then you break the silence This would be our last thrill You moved on without me Was I supposed to know That you had set me free? I didn't feel the freedom, but instead I sat up late at night, all alone My insides coiled up and deep in dread How would I go on and face the day Without you in my life, by my side I must find the strength to break away I'm not a victim, I will prevail This will just become a memory I am not a cautionary tale
July 1st, 2021 A 3-6-9 Poem Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Emile Pinet

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Date: 7/31/2021 7:08:00 PM
So sad! Congrats on your win. God bless you always, love, Gina
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Avery Won
Date: 8/1/2021 10:29:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 7/31/2021 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations Avery, your poem earned a distinguished place in my PoetrySoup contest. Very well done my friend, it was a difficult form to master, Emile.
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Avery Won
Date: 8/1/2021 7:03:00 AM
Thank you so much, Emile :)
Date: 7/31/2021 9:13:00 AM
Wonderful Writing. Congratulations!
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Avery Won
Date: 8/1/2021 10:29:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 7/1/2021 10:31:00 AM
Lovely poem. All the best for contest.
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Avery Won
Date: 7/1/2021 10:33:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 7/1/2021 7:54:00 AM
Excellent use of 3-6-9 format, Avery. Beautiful poem, too. Best wishes in Emile's contest.
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Avery Won
Date: 7/1/2021 8:05:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 7/1/2021 7:33:00 AM
My insides coiled up and deep in dread I'm not a victim, I will prevail Beautiful.
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Avery Won
Date: 7/1/2021 8:05:00 AM
Thank you :)

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