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Feel the Winter Coming

Autumn's moon truly radiant and full in a stippled and rapture blue sailcloth of inward bliss. How fragile is the troth in nature's errs that's hurled into the pull? Alter of light dramatize trembling leaves drifting throughout on the gravel below. Shadows cast across the ground in repose. Silence surge as darkness draws, heed for thieves. Snappish breeze spring up slicing through darkness. Wet mist and fever dew glimmer and press earth's unturned heart yet bizarrely ageless. Then, gently kiss in soft fading stillness. Winters day lull in early calm slumber, veiling life into a frosted wonder. 2/26/2019 al·ter verb change or cause to change in character or composition, typically in a comparatively small but significant way.

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Date: 2/28/2019 12:45:00 PM
just beautifully handled, eve...sending my congrats!...huggs
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Date: 2/27/2019 10:14:00 PM
Well penned, Eve. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 2/27/2019 6:22:00 PM
The first few lines are exciting!
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Date: 2/27/2019 4:07:00 PM
You have used some interesting word play here Eve, creative an effective great poem for my heart to feel. Watching the big snowflakes fall and thinking of you dear friend xo
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Date: 2/27/2019 3:32:00 PM
Oh, I was so sure spring was next on the horizon. Where do you live? Well written poem and is proof that winter does have its charms. Love< Joyce
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Date: 2/27/2019 1:02:00 PM
Captivating imagery dearest, Eve! Hope winter would be going away very soon ! Much enjoyed!
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Date: 2/27/2019 2:55:00 AM
Great imagery.. so wonderfully expressed..
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Date: 2/27/2019 12:28:00 AM
lovely winter poem
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