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Feel the Drum

Listen to the dark The silence of the drum calls Feel the soft caress Taut skin brushed my fingertips Worship gathered on my lips

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/4/2017 10:48:00 AM
A tanka that can be simply read, or complex. And that final line is a little gem, and I would have liked to have written it :)
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Date: 5/2/2017 11:24:00 AM
Nice :) 7!
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Date: 5/2/2017 1:40:00 AM
A tantalizing tanka, John! Loved it mate!
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