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It started in silence—until hunger twisted through her, and stillness came alive His heart crashed into hers—igniting, a forge to survive He fled the grayscale of before—chasing a love only others get to feel She was made to burn bright—but for him; she’d rip the world of the rest of its appeal She found devotion in his touch—in the way he made her believe in, raw, real, and rife No magic, no fate—just two haunted souls clawing their way back to life

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Date: 4/20/2025 10:34:00 PM
Beautiful writing, A.S. Wraps around you, it really does make you feel
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Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 4/21/2025 4:05:00 PM
I wish I knew how to write what a hug should feel like...A.S.
Date: 4/13/2025 4:51:00 PM
Where there was only emptiness, passion was forged… their hunger sated. Raw, real and rife with a look, a touch. It was everything.
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Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 4/13/2025 6:10:00 PM
Hugs! Metaphorically and literally... A.S.
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/13/2025 5:57:00 PM
Yes, and fortunate those who have it.
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Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 4/13/2025 5:45:00 PM
She is everything well past what most consider something... this is what life should be all about— Warmly A.S.

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