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Fate of a Rose

True life of a rose Carrier of emotions; A sentence to death

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Date: 1/15/2010 4:37:00 PM

Interesting perspective leaving the reader with a lot to think about. So much depth in just three lines. Keep on writing! Karen

James Fraser

Date: 9/10/2009 10:45:00 AM

Abe, i just love poems with Roses, and i enjoyed this one>>James

Anna Kittrell

Date: 12/17/2008 9:55:00 AM

Roses are symbols for many things. You have captured that well.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 12/5/2008 2:53:00 PM

nice poem, you are really good. I enjoyed the comments you left me.

Daniel Neal

Date: 12/4/2008 4:54:00 PM

What a great haiku you penned here Abe. The sacrifice of a rose is sad. DN

Anna Mayall

Date: 12/4/2008 10:53:00 AM

i like your poem

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/4/2008 5:51:00 AM

Wow. There is so much here. A most excellent haiku! Well done. Love, Shar

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/3/2008 9:19:00 PM

Clever idea and nice imagery. I never thought of the sacrifice a rose makes as it carries our emotions. Our love is in fact the rose's death sentence. Brilliant haiku here...Raul