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Farewell, Forever

Door slammed in your face Ground shakes beneath... you tremble ~ Personal earthquake

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/13/2019 11:06:00 PM
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I guess this might be what it would be like. I really have no idea. You have penned it well.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/14/2019 12:46:00 PM
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Sounds like you've avoided this particular earthquake! :) gw
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Susan Ashley
Date: 8/13/2019 6:50:00 PM
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Oh the quaking of emotional and physical hurt and pain is vividly captured in your impactful haiku, Gershon. Potent poetry. Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2019 8:58:00 PM
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When you feel this way, Susan, I know that I have achieved a measure of success. Thank you so much. Best wishes, Gershon
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/13/2019 4:50:00 PM
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Those shockwaves stay with you forever. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2019 5:58:00 PM
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They (those shockwaves) never do leave you, do they? ~ gw
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/13/2019 3:59:00 PM
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Well captured emotions of shock, hurt and aftershock, Gershon. Loved it.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2019 5:57:00 PM
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Thanks for your support for this haiku, Line. :) gw
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/13/2019 3:58:00 PM
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So powerful, personal earthquakes shake the most!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2019 5:57:00 PM
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Yes, and they're not milkshakes either. ~ gw

Book: Shattered Sighs